Synopsis
First we see a scene when the main character, a student in school is given homework from her teacher and at first glance, the girl isn't too sure what she'll do about it. Then we go to a scene where she's leaving school and runs into a couple of bullies who decide to give her a hard time. They throw things at her like trash and even bits of food. The girl just tries to avoid them and continues walking. We then cut to the scene where the girl is at home and reaches her desk and appears tired from what she just went through. She closes her eyes and starts daydreaming. In the dream we see her back at the same time and place of when the bullies started messing with her. But instead of leaving, the girl fights back. She uses lasers to shoot the objects the bullies throw at her, sends lightning to one to make them electrified and even causes one to disintegrate. This sends the bullies running for it, leaving the girl satisfied. Waking up the girl looks at her homework assignment sheet and sees that it says, "If you could go back in time and change any moment of your life in anyway you can, what would you do? Explain your answer in an essay and also include how you would do it and why. Include detail and description. The essay must be no less than 500 words. The girl smiles with an idea in mind and puts down the sheet takes a fresh sheet of paper out of her desk and a pencil and starts working.
I like the concept of this project; using your imagination to escape the stress and trouble in the real world. I do think however this story reminds me to much of your last project.
ReplyDelete1. It starts with her receiving work to do
2. she dreams of fighting/harming people
3. she ends at a desk doing work
Another problem I have is with the question on the homework assignment.
If she could change any moment in her life she would only change bullies picking on her? Seems of a bit of a small change in a life time. I think it should say "If you could go back in time and start that day over, what would you change about your day?"