Thursday, March 24, 2011

2nd Crit-on-crit for midterm

Lauren Willoughby

Project#5(midterm) 3/24/11

Major suggestions
  • Add more action and drama to the sword fight scene
  • The fantasy transition is bad.
  • Adjust the movements of the girl reaching for the paper.

I agree that more action is needed and I will defiantly see to that. I will also figure out the movements and transitions as well.

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