Crit-on-critique

Name: Lauren Willoughby

2/22/11

Major Suggestions

• Text (if meant to be read) is hard to read. Needs to be smoother and slower.
• Is the character necessary? Craftsmanship is poor.
• Too slow.

I agree with the following:

• The text is hard to read.
• Character craftsmanship needs work.

After studying the critiques I learned the following:

More time is needed to be spent on this animation and I need to slow down the text paths and make them smoother and easier to read if they're suppose to be read.

I also need to do better in drawing characters in photoshop.