Crit on Crits

Name: Lauren Willoughby

Project: 1

Title: Daydream

Date: 2/1/11

Major Suggestions:

• Be careful on which images or situations you use.
• Use a different image. Doesn't fit the daydream.
• Intro scene is kind of slow.

I agree with the critiques discussed above.

After studying the critiques I learned the following:

I need to pay attention to which images I find or come up with and make sure they fit with the whole presentation. I also need to really think about what I want my audience to see and get out of the animation I make.