Project #2
The Disappearing Ninja
2/9/11
Major Suggestions
- Drawings look amateurish. Work on scanning drawings.
- Ninja's legs look stiff, could look more jointed.
- Needs to be pushed further.
- Animator's room looks too neat.
I agree that my animation needs to be pushed. I wasn't trying to go for a childish look, but when I draw on photoshop, that's just how I do it. I do need to work on it more though.
What I've learned:
I was also intending for the ninja to look intangible when walking through the kunai knives, giving the idea of the stealth or speed of a ninja, but after this I can see why nobody got that impression. So I'll think of a new way to fix that.
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